This was my original draft for "A Working Student".
I decided to change the ending because the editing was very dodgy and I think it delivered too much of the narrative to the audience, my second draft (final piece) leaves the audience to figure out the ending for themselves.
I think the performance is much stronger on my final piece and editing is much better also, it also gave me the opportunity to use a tracking shot at the end.
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